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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-04-06 05:32 AM

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thunderous springtime
lightning clashes last four days
spring storms of the heart

©April 5, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

1 posted 2012-04-06 06:18 AM

Awesome scenery

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-04-06 06:53 AM

Thanks, MERCURY.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-04-06 08:15 AM

beautiful as always, your picture and poem are a perfect match my friend.

Lori

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-04-06 08:21 AM

Thank you, Lori.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2012-04-06 09:14 AM

Renewal through storms
heartbeats accelerate rhythm
white Spring clouds parade

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Very lovely Spring haiku, dear Jerry. Inspiring!

Margherita

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-04-06 09:16 AM

Many thanks, Margherita, and it is your response that is inspiring.

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

7 posted 2012-04-06 03:47 PM

wonderful description and picture...so far we have had beautiful skies and a lovely full moon~~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

8 posted 2012-04-06 03:48 PM

v. fine 'write' !

(great choice of photo.-imagery as well)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-04-06 04:41 PM

Thanks, nakdthoughts, I appreciate your kind words.

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Thanks, Bruce for the comment on the poem and picture.

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Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

10 posted 2012-04-07 03:57 AM

It must be something in the air, Jerry.

Make me wonder if lightning really does strike in the same place more than once... When it hits the heart, no doubt.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2012-04-07 05:28 AM

You are the only one who brought the heart into the comments, Klassy Lassy. And the poem wasn't solely about the weather. Thank you for being here.

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