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flash
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0 posted 2012-01-26 03:18 AM


They say the greatest wish of a dying person is to hold the hands of a loved one. I've witnessed it.


bedside vigil. . .
her firm grip
softens


--Al


© Copyright 2012 al fogel - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 2012-01-26 03:54 AM


so have I - thanks for sharing this.
no one should die alone, to hold the hand of a loved one in their final hours is an honour and one of the hardest things you will ever do.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-01-26 05:37 AM


For there to be a loved oe to hold your hand is the blessing.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

JL
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3 posted 2012-01-26 01:22 PM


Very touching read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

flash
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4 posted 2012-01-26 05:04 PM


Tracie, Jerry, JL: Thanks and I'm pleased this touched you deeply enough to comment.

Al

Margherita
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5 posted 2012-01-30 01:57 PM


Extremely touching ... an absolutely sacred moment, dear Al.

Margherita

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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6 posted 2012-01-30 02:27 PM


This is a very touching piece. I have never experienced a family member die before. My mom and dad did though. They were there when my grandmother passed.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


flash
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7 posted 2012-01-31 04:35 AM


The_Doctors_Angel_32, Margherita

Glad this ku touched a core and moved you to comment!

Al

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