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Open Poetry #48

Alexandrias Anthem

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

0 posted 2012-03-26 04:29 PM

tender shoot,
with delicately laced bud
and lock tight petals

soak up the sun
and drink in the rain
open your glorious petals

the hummingbird is thirsty
and the bumble bee makes busy
about the bushes

the garden is fragrant
and full of delightful sights
soft pastels, vivid brights

your bloom will hush
the boasting beauty
of fading flowers

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2012-03-26 05:20 PM

I love the first three lines, so well described I could feel it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2012-04-02 12:38 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2012-04-02 01:06 AM

So beautiful and so hopeful too.

A

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