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Daddy Goose38
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obama's a rice paper tiger

0 posted 2012-03-24 04:40 PM



Fish With Water.
I just had tuna fish with water.
(not felling like "making" anything).
Next I may have water with fish.
Next I may have fish with fish.
Next I may have water with water.
Next I may have salt with fish.
Next I may have fish with salt.
Next I may have salt with water.
Next I may have water with salt.
Next I may have water with water ...
Ever had water with water?
I just made this up
because I don't have anything else to write about
and because I'm feeling kind of lonely
and am hoping for some email.
Do gooses eat fishis?
Gives me goose bumps just thinking about it.

Jaime

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1 posted 2012-03-24 11:05 PM


Yes, Jaime, I do believe geese eat fish.
Little ones, maybe; certainly not tuna...
those could be the very culprits
that would ruin one ah yah
type of goose, that would eat tuna...

I understand that most don't understand
that you cannot really see, nor hear,
and that your poetry is a taste of type,
and we should make that clear....

so let a friend bump you now, and then
and now again,
because poetry is of any type,
no matter how, or when.

Sending hugs as is my way
because you're so ever bright
even if your day is ever more a night
even in darkness we might see
if only we could hear

the blankness of your world at heart
and then your heart, we come near.

Hugs always

K

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