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Gunslinger
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0 posted 2012-03-20 12:44 PM


The mossy Northwest forests-
The sun-baked Southwest plain…
The tropic island beaches,
I’d see them all again.

The humid, sweltering jungle,
The snow-capped mountain peaks…
Reward the wandering dreamer-
Provide the balm he seeks.

To question, delve, examine-
The thoughts and dreams of yore…
With every bit of knowledge,
I find I long for more.

A dreamer? Aye, a minstrel?
Perhaps I am that, too…
With what I’ve lived, and all I’ve read-
I scarce know what is “true”.

But is that not the magic-
Found on the written page?
To grant forgotten vistas-
To men of every age?

So I will read; then dream; then write-
And knowledge I’ll pursue…
Until I’m withered, hair gone white,
And Death collects his due.


© Copyright 2012 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 2012-03-21 12:41 PM


A true minstril you are Gunslinger... Many a wonderful scene have your words painted in my mind.  A few bleak ones , too... lol.   like the theme here.   Keep on painting 'em, friend.

Michael

OwlSA
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2 posted 2012-03-23 04:39 AM


Glad to hear that you will keep on writing and I and so many other Pipsters will keep on reading it.  Yes, a minstrel, you are, John.  There is music and truth and beauty in what you write.  I don't favour rhyme except if written by a master of rhyme, so I favour your rhyming poetry, because you do it superbly.

Owl  

suthern
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3 posted 2012-03-23 12:51 PM


But is that not the magic-
Found on the written page?
To grant forgotten vistas-
To men of every age?

There is magic in the written word... magic that lets us remember... magic that encourages us to dream. Keep writing your magic, GS... for your vistas are greatly appreciated!

JL
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2012-03-23 09:55 PM


"A dreamer? Aye, a minstrel?
Perhaps I am that, too…
With what I’ve lived, and all I’ve read-
I scarce know what is “true”."

I'm with you on this one...
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2012-03-23 10:16 PM


Nice...while I was stuffing envelopes for the Republican Party the other day a man across from me mentioned that when he was young he was stationed in the Army in Pirmasens, Germany and someday he'd like to go back.  I told him I was also stationed in Pirmasens, and I did return to Germany later with my ex-wife...James
ebonygirl
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6 posted 2012-03-24 10:36 AM


Enjoyed your poem, ms. e
Paul Wilson
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7 posted 2012-03-24 06:18 PM


John...Really enjoyed. Your poetry always facinates me. Writing your lifes stories is what you do very well my friend. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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