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Spring Moment |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Spring Moment Were I but Time’s master … the world would freeze in eternal breathless wonder by this translucent lake of perfect moonlight, just before the break of dawn and the brisk restlessness of Spring. The only question for the silence would be how to love this moment more. --- b. e. adams (3/17/2012) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Your poetry, at times, is so deep it is scary. I smiled when I used the "S" word. I merely meant that your thought process is considerable and wonderful. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
LOve it, a very nice, seasonal poem. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Ron63 Junior Member
since 2012-03-18
Posts 49Suffolk, Eng, UK |
A beautiful poem with a nice flow and good alliteration and assonances. Goes to show that rhyme is not a necessity. Good write! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What isit about spring (or a lovely poem about spring) that gives one such a feeling of renewel? Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Loving the moment you described... well done my friend. ms. e |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You have captured this snapshot in time beautifully Secondhanddreampoet ... Loved the visuals here, nicely penned indeed.  Best wishes, Kit |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks to all of you grand and lovely poets (and human beings) who traverse the fine blue sands of "P.I.P.-land" by the cyber-sea and commented on this most recent 'write' of mine. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Whilst, pragmatically, Bruce, there would be all sorts of fall-outs, poetically I wish you were Time's Master so that we could keep that perfect scene at that perfect moment you describe, forever. What I will settle for is that I am glad you were Time's Master for that breath-taking moment. Reading this poem is paradoxially like opening curtains (drapes?) on to a world of perfect reality too beautiful to be magic. Owl |
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