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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-03-14 08:04 PM


Really

When you love a woman
you will want to
spend your whole
life with her
to hold her
to kiss her
to share your
life with her.
When you love a woman
you will always
want another day and
night, and tomorrow,
and to lose her
in life or death
will break your heart
but you will let her go
because you love her,
isn't that really
what love is...

JamesLee
12March
2012

  

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-03-14 08:13 PM


Yeah, and love is allowing someone to get over on you because you love them. That isn't love, that is just being stupid.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2012-03-14 10:09 PM


to lose her
in life or death
will break your heart
but you will let her go
because you love her,
isn't that really
what love is...

I do understand your message of your poem,
and I agree... you may loose, but will never forget.

Nice, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2012-03-15 01:17 AM


Jerry I suppose some would see me as stupid but love doesn't always work out even for the smartest...JL I appreciate that you understand what I am saying...James
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2012-03-20 06:34 AM


yes indeed ... it is! (well said) ...
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2012-03-20 08:42 AM


Once the mind is made up there is really nothing you can do to change things - and when the time comes it's often much better for you and (her) to move on, maybe preserve a friendship - not that I, for one, ever wanted to maintain a "friendship" with a past lover.

I basically agree with your entire premise here, my friend, being that there comes a point when it's time to move on.

j.

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