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luminosity
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0 posted 2012-03-02 12:17 PM


I had this ache
it ruled my every move
fueled my actions
however self destructing  they might become.

I had this ache
unable to be satisfied
at least by earthly means
for I know, I tried in ways
that want not recall.

I had this ache
and as I did, it too grew older
the need to fill it ultimately
became vital to survival.

I have this ache I would'st have touted,
wording it poetically for all to see.
But not now for
now I shall say I have an ache,
transformed.

No longer unfilled
no longer searching for something
to satisfy, my Lord, because of You
the emptiness within-
this Sacred Ache-
is overfull.



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OwlSA
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1 posted 2012-03-02 12:51 PM


Oh, how absolutely beautiful - and so fulfilling for the reader too, luminosity.

Owl

luminosity
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2 posted 2012-03-02 03:23 PM


thank  you kind lady
suthern
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3 posted 2012-03-13 03:20 PM


He does fill all the emptiness, doesn't He? *S* What beautiful testimony this is! *S*
luminosity
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4 posted 2012-03-13 07:25 PM


thank you lady...sigh
JL
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5 posted 2012-03-14 07:29 PM


"No longer unfilled
no longer searching for something
to satisfy, my Lord, because of You
the emptiness within-
this Sacred Ache-
is overfull."

Your love for the LORD is beautiful.
Love this close to your poem, yet I know
it is continuing.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2012-03-16 09:49 AM


There is much to say
when it comes to the Truth
of the Light, the Matter, the Soul...

I so enjoy seeing you
writing again...




Margherita
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7 posted 2012-03-31 12:16 PM


I am so grateful that I came across this most beautiful poem today, dear Luminosity. We know and yet we always need a little nudge ... thank you for this poem from my heart.

Margherita


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2012-03-31 07:12 PM


Nice...James
luminosity
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9 posted 2012-04-02 02:54 PM


thank you all, I prayed that this would be read by someone who needed to read it, and my prayer was answered
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