Haiku's Within the Morning

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Open Poetry #48

Haiku's Within the Morning

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

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0 posted 2013-09-05 07:18 PM

Within the morning
crickets sing their last ballet
for a dying star

The sun peeks through blinds
rays of golden light hit me
I lay there and groan

the alarm goes off
my body still on sleep mode
my dream said take care

Morning became noon
black ants carry their fallen
as the wind rushed out

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2013-09-10 10:25 PM

enjoyed...James

poetically ghetto
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since 2004-01-20

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2 posted 2013-09-11 02:47 AM

something about that golden light which is magical, it can invigorate you or it can leave you in the groaning state as you so put it, I enjoyed this

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

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Midwest

3 posted 2013-09-15 07:07 PM

the fuzz of morning that either draws us in or leaves us yearning to sleep in
cool haikus

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

4 posted 2013-09-18 05:06 PM

James- thanks for the comment glad you enjoyed them.

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

5 posted 2013-09-18 05:07 PM

Poetically ghetto- yep the sun was invigorating, yet I didn't want it, just wanted to sleep. Thanks for the comment, delighted that you enjoyed it.

ken206573
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Posts 487

6 posted 2013-09-18 05:08 PM

EmmaRose- Thank you, happy you enjoyed these cool haiku's.

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