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MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15
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Lancashire England

0 posted 2012-02-28 04:33 AM



Over the garden fence

Blustered flustered, she mouthed the words
In silent tongue the secrets told
Her hands red raw from dolly tub
The alley breeze was blowing cold

Tom cat watching his whiskers preened
The wooden pegs he likes to chew
Her sleeves rolled up her ham shank arms
Shame of Doris,at forty two

The ashes in the dustbin cool
And she so prim like collar starched
To feel the lash of gossip's tongue
As down the lane the brass band marched

The sooty rain to stain the shirts
And vinegar on window panes
You won't believe who died today
And weeds that grow in cobbled lanes

See Mrs Booth in negligee
The milkman likes her toast the best
And have you heard of that young girl
In her first bra, just out of vest

They tittle tattle like the birds
For what they see is always told
No sweetness on the tip of tongue
She goes back in, her brew gone cold.


© Copyright 2012 MICHAEL HUGHES - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-02-28 05:24 AM


Aye, the gossipers will gossip, the tongues will way, and if you don't show up to tittle tattle in the morrow they will talk about you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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California U.S.A
2 posted 2012-02-28 09:12 AM


Gossip... and those that do... disappoint  many.
Enjoyed, Ms. E

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3 posted 2012-02-28 09:12 AM


I really like this... You capture the tongue wagglers so very well... nothing is safe or sacred. Great write!
ice
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since 2003-05-17
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Pennsylvania
4 posted 2012-02-28 09:46 AM


Reminds me of The Scarlet Letter..
enjoyed reading this, nicely done
in form and topic.

"It is difficult
to get the news from poems
yet men die miserably every day
for lack of what is found there"
(William Carlos Williams)

luminosity
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Posts 813

5 posted 2012-03-06 06:14 PM


hmmmm what captivating writing ....hmmmm
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