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the note i never gave
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the note i never gave |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
I'll tell you a secret, you know it already though, i hate you well really i love you its perfectly fine that you can't return the feeling and of course there is no point in wishing there is no point in hoping and so it is best to eliminate all feeling how can i though? how can i let that feeling go without suffering from chrominc agony and ending up a hollow husk. i hate you i hate you but really i love you i can't believe it really i'm quivering and crying like some sort of kid, i hate you i hate you but i'll tell you a secret though i rave and obsess over past loves and regrets there is something you may not have known i was broken insidebefore i met you but with your smiles and laughs and most of all with your friendship i mnded my soul i mended my heart and after much ponderous thought i resolved i would never love as expected i fell for you and though it may sound like an old story told over and over again here is the secret though tonight with much grief and the saddest most chonic i pain i let you go here is my secret for you to forever keep and that is that though i leave you alone inside i will always love you |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is an awesome poem. I could feel the pain and the love. This sort of thing happens a lot in life. I truly enjoyed the read!!! When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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