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Open Poetry #48
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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
0 posted 2013-05-02 04:26 AM


WELCOME
29 April 2013

There are corners of my mind
where you creep in
unannounced
and caress my thoughts
and star my eyes
and paint my lips a wistful smile
and strum my heart strings
into timeless tunes
and tickle my lungs
into sparkling laughter
and bubbling joy
and loosen my shoulders
into light
and whisper words
I long to hear
and I revere
those sacred corners of my mind.

Owl
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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2013-05-02 04:38 AM

Romantic poetry at it's finest, Diana.
                                 Ida
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2013-05-02 05:14 AM

Thank you, Ida.  Smiles.

Owl
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2013-05-02 05:15 AM

You've captured a wonderful feeling here OwlSA, I wish I could feel this all day long. Very pretty piece.  

Best wishes,
/Kit
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2013-05-02 05:28 AM

Thank you, Kit, for your sweet reply.

Owl
EmmaRose
Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
5 posted 2013-05-02 11:48 AM

It's very special when someone just seems to be able to softly seep into the sacred spots of ours.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2013-05-02 12:35 PM

Thank you, EmmaRose.  Yes it is.  Smiles.

Owl
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
7 posted 2013-05-02 02:37 PM

grand-fine simple and pure 'Romanticism' at its very best!
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
8 posted 2013-05-02 03:32 PM

Thank you for such stunning praise, Bruce.

Owl
Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
9 posted 2013-05-03 01:49 PM

What a breath of celestial air, pure and soul cleansing fresh… Ahhh.   Enjoyed!  
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
10 posted 2013-05-03 02:27 PM

Thank you, Bob, for that lovely description of my poem.  

Owl
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