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MICHELMAS
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0 posted 2012-02-20 10:40 AM



Rare Vintage

A trace of wine upon your lips
A promise oh so red
A hummingbird your nectar sips
The words of Love unsaid

And sunshine rays within the blonde
A smile deep in the blue
Your eyes that shine when I respond
To kisses oh so true

A fleeting touch against your breast
You turn with lips apart
The coming night,no sleep,no rest
The rhythm of my heart

Through wine now low,see firelight glow
A promise to fulfil
And to that place I'll take you now
No breeze and curtains still

And were there times I did not care
Love's candle burning low
I see my soul in mirrored stare
Our Love did never go

From spring's first Love, our Maypole dance
And summer's warmth to grow
Was Autumn time,just mist or trance
Love's winter pure as snow

© Copyright 2012 MICHAEL HUGHES - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2012-02-25 02:07 PM


Michael,  how wonderful that I get to be the first to comment on this poem.  Thank you all for waiting for me!  

This makes me think of a Crayol box of love.  I am infused with color and passion.  I so love this poem.

Alison

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2 posted 2012-02-25 07:14 PM


Through wine now low,see firelight glow
A promise to fulfil
And to that place I'll take you now
No breeze and curtains still

And were there times I did not care
Love's candle burning low
I see my soul in mirrored stare
Our Love did never go

How beautiful and romantic... Some things take time... and are worth waiting for. *S*

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