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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-04-16 08:50 AM



I gave a warm heart
Beating with its strange cadence
Non-returnable

~*~ I know a guy who's addicted to brake fluid. He says he can stop any time. ~*~

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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2013-04-16 03:06 PM


Seems reasonable to me!  Enjoyed!  


Hey, looks like we both woke up today in a 'Haiku' frame of mind.

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-04-16 03:17 PM


Yes, we did wake up thinking haiku, Bob. thanks for being here . . .

~*~ I know a guy who's addicted to brake fluid. He says he can stop any time. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2013-04-17 09:03 AM


Beautiful Jerry

lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-04-17 09:11 AM


Thank you Lori.

~*~ I know a guy who's addicted to brake fluid. He says he can stop any time. ~*~

katahdin
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5 posted 2013-04-17 07:46 PM


Nice one!
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2013-04-17 08:09 PM


I appreciate your kind words, Kat.

~*~ I know a guy who's addicted to brake fluid. He says he can stop any time. ~*~

EmmaRose
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7 posted 2013-04-18 09:48 AM


Love can never be returned, it already made itself known
sweet poem

jwesley
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8 posted 2013-04-18 10:13 AM


Very, very nice, my friend.

j.

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2013-04-18 10:56 AM


Thank you so much, EmmaRose, you speak the truth.

~*~ I know a guy who's addicted to brake fluid. He says he can stop any time. ~*~

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2013-04-18 10:56 AM


Thank you, j.

~*~ I know a guy who's addicted to brake fluid. He says he can stop any time. ~*~

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