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LorienLord
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since 2013-02-03
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Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2013-02-14 08:28 PM



On a warm summer's eve
a gentle breeze carries the scent
that calls me to your waiting arms
moonbeams and fireflies
luminaries that light the night
crickets and croakers acappella choir sing
as we dance the dance
that binds our souls and entwines our hearts
until our bodies merge as one
on the cool green bed on which we lay
now wet with the dew of passions play
and what was once a virgin glen
is now a shrine I worship at
as on my knees I find myself
drinking from your spring of love
and then my lips search out the bud
that opens with a sunrise kiss
in a burst of luminescent dreams
that leaves you trembling in my arms
and I asleep in yours.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2013-02-14 09:18 PM


A pleasure to read...James
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2013-02-14 09:49 PM


enjoyed, my friend ... loved the
"...crickets and croakers acappella choir..."


j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2013-02-14 10:13 PM


What a very nice poem of love and love's enticements. Very well done . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2013-02-15 01:35 AM


a love atmosphere that is very sensitive and poetical, love your words,

yann

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