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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-01-23 06:35 AM


you had your hair up that way
with the messy all over it
said it made your girl self smile
and get the giggle place tickle

I listened to old record afternoons
and you were the soprano song
with your eyes closed you sang
so my eyes would not touch you

and make you say the wrong words
then blush and put your hand there
over your heart where fragile was
when you were trying to be all perfect

and I only needed all of your pieces

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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-23-2012 08:50 AM).]

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bel1e
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1 posted 2012-01-23 08:27 AM


love the playful fragility in this, dark One~*~

XOXO

             

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-01-23 08:47 AM


BBBel1e...thanks naughty daughter
Nicole
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3 posted 2012-01-23 09:28 AM


I've heard that perfection is overrated; but a girl can certainly try.  All kinds of fragile little pieces everywhere, love this...
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-01-23 09:37 AM


Ms Nicole...thank you lady for your eyes here.  Perfection to me is a thousand piece jigsaw puzzle pizza...and after it is put together, it is edible and makes one want more.  Don't tell Papa John, he will start selling them.
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5 posted 2012-01-23 12:52 PM


with your eyes closed you sang
so my eyes would not touch you

This brought back such memories... when I had a voice, I had no nerve... now I lack both... but the fragile's still there. *S*

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2012-01-23 01:19 PM


Ms Suthern...thanks lady friend...I do concerts for the deaf and I dance for the blind..and they never know I have lost my nerve to perform.  I would love to hear you sing.!!
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7 posted 2012-01-25 01:13 AM


What a wonderful mess it all is.  Love it.

Ali-san

LeeJ
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8 posted 2012-01-25 07:38 AM


so fragile, tender and sweet....
enjoyed this Dark...

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2012-01-25 07:39 AM


Ms Ali-san, thank you lady friend


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Ms Lee-J...thanks lady for the sexy eyes

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