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Open Poetry #48

T for 2 and 2 for T

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2013-02-05 06:02 PM

Out of a Triangle
and now it's just, T time

High T,
What is this feeling?

I don't know, but it hurts a bit
watching her on the dance floor with another

yet another, younger, man
as she floats to flirt

and yet she's mine...
on loan for two months

a chosen doll face,
a real "Moll"

"reet", petite
solid sweet

as the swing lingo
goes...

my dance partner
the awkward silences
the nervousness
but oh, those sweaty kisses

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

1 posted 2013-02-13 11:34 AM

Oh, those doll faces!
They will dance with another at the drop of a hat.
I know the story well.
Nice!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2013-02-13 12:33 PM

so cute poem, martiniat, i love very much the ending and all the poem, too, makes me dream too,

have a nice day

yann

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