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Open Poetry #48

Receiving Her Kiss

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-01-31 09:28 PM

Receiving Her Kiss

As it melts
into my lips
I am glad
that I know her
still I wish
to know her better
I want to be closer
so close that
I raise her heartbeat
so close that
I feel her heart
beating for me
like mine beats for her,
everytime I share
her kiss.

JamesLee
31January
2013

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-01-31 09:39 PM

Keep kissing her . . . It'll happen.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-01-31 09:42 PM

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-01-31 09:53 PM

Sniff. Harrumph. James gets a kiss and I don't? I'm hurt.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2013-02-01 06:45 AM

quote:
so close that
I raise her heartbeat

I am sure you do that already, James. This is very lovely.

Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2013-02-01 10:51 AM

Great writing, James!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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