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Amberzlynnc
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0 posted 2013-01-27 12:51 PM



The years are passing in a blink
They’re gone before I’ve time to think
The curls have fallen from my hair
and “new-ish” jeans sport worn-out tears
As days go by, they start to shrink
The years are passing in a blink

-Amber

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-01-27 12:57 PM


Yes. Yes. Yes. And they are gone. Make use of today. It will never return.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria
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2 posted 2013-01-27 01:32 PM


Enjoyed Amber...I never thought that my jeans were shrinking, that might be why they dont fit ha!!

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2013-01-27 03:08 PM


This one tickles.
I had to laugh at how it seems every generation espouses the same emotion to getting...  older.


Nice write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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