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Open Poetry #48

Driftwood

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-01-13 02:36 PM

Huddled on the frozen sand
waves slipping inches
away from her
ice shined mahogany
Snow drifted in
her curvacious
belies an image
of softness
in the bitter

LGR(C)1/13/13

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-01-13 04:47 PM

Ahh . . . Driftwood is back . . . Will be looking for more of her . . .

"Huddled on the frozen sand"

"of softness
in the bitter"

Those three lines set the tone and emptied it out in classic style.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-14-2013 03:36 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-01-14 08:28 AM

Thanks my friend, I thought she'd been forgotten.

lori

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2013-01-14 02:40 PM

Grasping my imagination, your “Driftwood”, I go from seascape
to a scene of Victoria’s secret.
Love your poetry!!

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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