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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2013-01-06 08:23 AM



THE RIGHT THING
6  January 2013

Sometimes discovering
or knowing
the truth
and doing the right thing
about it
can shatter one’s heart
and rip one’s liver apart
and wrench out one’s lungs
and crash a battering ram
into one’s solar plexus
with the power of a cannon
and drown oneself in hot tears
but the harder it is
the more right it is
and that is our consolation
and I know
we will both do our part
with every fibre of our being.

Owl

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latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
1 posted 2013-01-06 11:53 AM


I sincerely hope this is not
a devastating decision being made.
You write so convincingly, it tears at my heart. Having been in that place of pertubation and not being quite sure of
how to handle it or which way to face or  to whom to turn for advice, causes life to become harder to take in stride.
Best to you,and may the answer appear and flip things around to a better view. jo


OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2013-01-06 04:09 PM


Thank you, Martyjo for your kindness, compassion and concern.  There was no indecision.  As soon as the truth was known, the right decision was taken with immediate effect, in all kindness to everyone.  There was no other way.  It tears at my heart too, but like Diana Ross, I will survive.  

Owl

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2013-01-06 04:36 PM


I'm a little lost, but yes, words to live by,  the truth shall set you free.  

Hope things work out for you~  

Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
4 posted 2013-01-06 04:44 PM


The truth and the broken heart.  It never gets any easier..beautiful piece, hope all is well.

Cheers

Tomer

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2013-01-06 05:40 PM


Thanks, Blues, for your kindness.  They will.

Thanks, Tomer for your kindness, too.  It isn’t, but it will be.

Owl

Richy
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

6 posted 2013-01-06 06:07 PM



this reminds me of tough love Diana.. its called tough for good reason, because its harder on the person giving it then recieving..

if i were to think of things that were pure or right, you would be right on top of the list..


OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2013-01-06 06:55 PM


Thank you, Richy.  That is a sweet and encouraging thing to say, and comes just at the right time.

Owl

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