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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2012-12-31 03:59 PM


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There are
Three white crosses
Just beyond the curb
On old Ridge Road

We pass them by
On our way out of town
Off on a trip to Michigan
To view the scenery
And dine on fine cuisine

The autumn fields
Are sunlit brown
Here and there a wooden barn
Against a pale blue sky

Your long blond hair
Is all I see
Your voice a spirit
I never expected to hear

I drive the car
Oblivious to where
Or who I’ve been before

There’s only you
And no one else


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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (12-31-2012 05:53 PM).]

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
1 posted 2013-01-10 04:44 PM


I like this alot

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
2 posted 2013-01-10 06:31 PM


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Thanks Juju


John


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