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Klassy Lassy
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0 posted 2012-02-11 01:36 AM



Dare I
speak of heaven
light in laughing eyes
love-full hearts
to leaven promise borne
on sighs?

Caught up
on a kiss or two
bliss and teardrops shoal
songs to sing horizons blue
arms to make me
whole.

In timeless
twists so clever
I shall sail cosmic streams
embrace you now, forever
in your sweetest dream
of dreams.



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tracie66
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1 posted 2012-02-11 03:07 AM


beautifully written, what a gorgeous write

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

ice
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2 posted 2012-02-11 04:20 AM


Ms.Lassey
Compacted bliss..you just have to love it.

enjoyed

Margherita
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3 posted 2012-02-11 05:16 AM


In timeless
twists so clever
I shall sail cosmic streams


Yes! Dear Karen, this is overwhelming in its blissful energy and poetic rendering.

Margherita

2islander2
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4 posted 2012-02-11 05:22 AM


so gorgeous,

thanks

yann

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2012-02-11 06:24 AM


What a very cool write about the Heavenly bliss of love and its tributaries. Wonderful job!

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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6 posted 2012-02-11 10:36 AM


Nice! So soft, so packed with thought.
Ms. E

Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2012-02-12 07:01 AM


4:00 A.M. Sleepless and not feeling well, but appreciate you all for reading and leaving such pleasant comments here.  You are my Valentines, all. ~Karen
Margherita
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8 posted 2012-02-12 07:51 AM


Sorry to hear you  did not feel well in the night hours, dear Karen, maybe you can have a nap in the afternoon to reintegrate the sleep pensum! Have a beautiful Sunday!

Margherita

Klassy Lassy
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9 posted 2012-02-12 12:12 PM


Margherita.  
jwesley
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10 posted 2012-02-13 12:07 PM


Dare you not - my friend, share such things with us...much enjoyed this...share some more...

j.

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11 posted 2012-02-13 12:17 PM




Y  E  S  !!!

Klassy Lassy
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12 posted 2012-02-13 02:33 AM


  Humpty Dumpty swoon!

It's true, my poet friends, the shortest distance is a smile.  It's good for what ails me.     

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (02-13-2012 04:03 AM).]

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2012-02-13 01:45 PM


Ms KL...only you could do this..enjoyed you.
Klassy Lassy
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14 posted 2012-02-13 03:09 PM


Daark,   Hope the rest of your day has been enjoyable, too.  


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