a tale of eyes not too far from the north

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Open Poetry #48

a tale of eyes not too far from the north

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-12-17 10:14 PM

They ran under a novel
the kind that turned the
sparrows towards the sun
and felt the rise of the garden
fall between a small scared lip
of her mouth
as she kissed the back end of his lips

She ran her fingers through his hair
for the river had a small light
and he heard her voice
under the chasm of the river

She took off his shirt
naked, to the left of the waterfall
they're they stood
without strangers of a wild wood
He could fall over her face
and her slow moving fingers
braced the sound of the wind
until they filtered through his hair
much like the way they
he use to feel her breasts
like the sangria that rose through
the winds honest breathe

His eyes tore apart the sad tale
of a woman that cared for a silken body
but fell between the lies and a share of a pie
that could no longer fit the right light
for him to hold her dear

So he undressed her,
took her shirt off
like the oceans tide

For the laugh of a woman
no longer felt the sorrows of a mans heart
no longer did a tear come from anothers mans side

So, he felt the ride and he took her shirt
like a rope off the walls canyon
Until, she caught a small lie
under the bellows of the riviera

She touched his right side
for the left was shy
undetermined, conflicted
so she caressed the right
for it felt at ease
to lean on the hand of a woman's indelible touch

[This message has been edited by Tomer (12-17-2012 11:31 PM).]

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

1 posted 2012-12-31 07:21 AM

my newly developed appreciation for abstraction is affirmed by the tender suggestions in this poem, which exhorts me to read all poetry with sensitivity to the arts most complimentary tempo and to be attentive to the vast dimensional expanses that are often veiled subtly from hasty and casual inquirers. this presentation is a provocative portrait for the sophisticated observer to behold.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2012-12-31 08:57 PM

This is so seductive, tender and loving and so very passionate.

Gawd, I love a happy ending!!

Smiling at you and your beautiful mind!!!

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2013-01-01 06:59 PM

Ethern-

Appreciate your support and love for abstract poetry. Great comments all around. Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2013-01-01 07:01 PM

Blues-

Appreciate the love. Happy you enjoyed the ending...Take care of yourself.

Cheers

Tomer

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