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In The Morning |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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In the morning while my loves still sleep and the house is speaking in creaks and taps and hums I bounce black words on white from a semi sleepy head Fuzzy dream fragment linger imparting from my heart pieces of peaceful Coffee and wide awake soon claim my attention letting the dreaded dread begin Ah but if and only I could highlight and delete all my consternation cleared away and my plain and simple complete I look for me among the debris of a drama from back then trying to find a nugget of my nit-picky that kept me on an even keel But that was before that ship sank and drowned a good part of me LGR(C)2/10/12 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The past can, and does at times, reach out to chew on our soft places, Lori. Nice work dealing with it though. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
sinking its teeth into my tenders today and it is driving me. Stepping away every so often to write this helped. Thanks for listening to me whine some more...I been doing alot of that lately. Lori  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
feeling your heartache in this heartfelt piece ~hugs~ Lori Love is the life of the soul... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Awakening to the dreaded dread... Seeking the peace beyond all understanding is a daily search for harmonies in quiet places. I found myself smiling ruefully at your words, and thinking how wise it is to sometimes step away from the daily bombardment, at least momentarily, to regroup and breathe. There will always be a whine to the daily grind, but you aren't it, Lori. This touched my heart with it's wistfulness.  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Tracie66 thanks for the read and the hugs. I'm still climing that same mountain today but I can see the summet. Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Klassy Lassy Thank you for your very kind words and I wish it were just daily grind but I am truly grieving a change in myself call it a PTSD of sorts. Ironically if I wasn't so hard on myself about it, it wouldn't be so hard on me. Lori |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Awww.... I hate it when renovations are so rough. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I enjoyed your words and phrasing, Lori. Hope things change soon. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm sorry that a good part of you were drowned, Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ms E Things are looking up...I can see light at the end of the tunnel Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hey Jerry, thanks for the kinds words my friend Lori |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
glad you can see the light at the end of the tunnel Lori Love is the life of the soul... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Fuzzy dream fragment linger imparting from my heart pieces of peaceful If only we could hang onto those pieces! But they're obliterated so easily... Great write! |
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