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Hitman612s
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since 2010-01-27
Posts 11
Illinois,

0 posted 2012-12-10 09:47 AM


EDIT**  I wrote this many years ago. I posted it again because I couldn't find the original post. Well I just found the thread that I posted a couple years ago. Sorry for the re-post.



“THIS NEEDS TO BE KNOWN”
by: DAN HITNER

Love,
Love is like a fire. The more you put into it, the longer it lasts
If it is ignored, that brightness will pass
Pass? Oh yes it will pass.
It needs to be recognized in all of its forms.
Lack of love is the cause of all the social storms

This needs to be known

Love is not just a word, it is many other things.
Allow love into your life, and changes it will bring.
Changes like:
A picture with a smile, not a picture with a frown.
Allow love into your life and it will turn your world around

This needs to be known

Love is a result, and love is a reason
Love is the reason you can’t sleep
The result of that girl is love.
Hold up, that doesn’t rhyme.
But that’s the thing with love, it twists your mind
You backwards say stuff.
Say stuff backwards, my bad.
If you don’t have love, love is something you should have.

This needs to be known

Love may make you sound like a fool, but love makes you feel great
If you don’t have love, you have too much hate
So push out the hate, and pull in the love
And the heavens will shine from way up above
But dont go chasing love, let love find you
Because if you force love, that love is not true

This needs to be known

Love is a key and it can open your heart.
Even when you think you’re at the end,
It can give you a new start.
Love can come to you, no matter what you’ve done.
And love can come at any age, even now when we’re so young.

This needs to be known.





© Copyright 2012 Daniel Allen Hitner - All Rights Reserved
Namyh
Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988

1 posted 2012-12-10 04:16 PM


Hitman - I see the light preacher. Hallelujah! I hear the message. Amen! Nice work Dan. Namyh
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2012-12-14 07:30 PM


Nice thoughts...it is my understanding that many of our responses when it comes to love are responses of fear...James
mellowdown
Junior Member
since 2012-12-19
Posts 30
usa
3 posted 2012-12-20 12:46 PM


So glad for his re-post, I might have missed it, yes, this indeed needs to be known to all hearts and souls,

a poem is a sigh
a melody of song
a musical lullaby

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