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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-12-01 08:28 PM


Layers of Satisfaction


Nice to see
a plumeria flower
in my honeys
long black silky hair,
looks like it
should always be there;
but after we romantically tussle
and kiss everything is amiss
except for her smile
and my layers
of satisfaction.


JamesLee
30November
2012

    


  


  

  

    

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Michael
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1 posted 2012-12-01 08:47 PM


Very nice when things are amiss in a good way.  Enjoyable read.

Michael

Victoria
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2 posted 2012-12-01 08:52 PM


You are a very busy man ha.Sounds like you have alot of fun James.

Love: A temporary insanity curable by marriage. by Ambrose Bierce

Ethern
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3 posted 2012-12-01 11:18 PM


a pleasantly provocative production, pipper
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2012-12-03 07:34 PM


Thank you Michael, Victoria and Ethern for the nice response...sometimes my possibilities, my fantasy and my reality blend but I will leave you to imagine which is which...James
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