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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-10-09 06:04 AM

An impulsive cry in the dark,
And all of the words sound the same
It sped through the night like a spark,
It was my name! It was my name!

I recognized the voice so sweet,
And it came from a far off land,
Sent her back this message discreet,
I understand! I understand!

©September 17, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2012-10-09 11:15 AM

Could feel the angst!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-10-09 11:17 AM

Yes. You got it right, Blues. Thank you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

mvvenkataraman
Member

since 2011-11-12

Posts 72
India

3 posted 2012-10-09 12:15 PM

This poem is a fine one
The poet has aptly used
Rhyming words with skill
A small piece truly nice.

mvvenkataraman

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-10-09 12:26 PM

Many thanks to you, mvvenkataraman, I appreciate your kind thoughts.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2012-10-09 03:37 PM

thats all anyone really wants isnt it my friend..

someone to just listen, and understand..

or at the very least, just listen

advice should be saved for ourselves huh hahaha

great little pearl here buddy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-10-09 03:49 PM

Yep to be listened to and understood is the ultimate in communications, Richy. Thanks for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2012-10-09 07:03 PM

I think you have yourself a pearl here, my friend!

Lori

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

8 posted 2012-10-09 07:17 PM

Nice one!
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-10-09 07:40 PM

Hi Lori, thank you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-10-09 07:41 PM

I appreciate it Kat . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

11 posted 2012-10-09 09:47 PM

Very interesting. Excellent, dude!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2012-10-10 05:38 AM

Thank you for the read and comment.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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