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Open Poetry #48

When Can I See You Again

Street Poet
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 82

0 posted 2012-10-06 10:56 PM

The city isn't that big
but I can't assume
that we'll naturally cross paths again.

Your smile, sense of humor, and vibe
is rare among these other folks
I'm forced to encounter.

A causal conversation
can turn into a
consensual romance if you let it.

Dinner, movie, a walk to somewhere random?
I'm totally into clichÃ©s
If you are.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2012-10-07 12:45 PM

delightful, i love this story and various hopes , thanks a lot,

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-10-07 06:45 AM

Love this light, but serious message to that one who you are tuned into to. Last line is perfect.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2012-10-07 09:28 PM

enjoyed...really liked the last line.

j.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2012-10-08 05:48 PM

Very cool! Life isn't meant to be taken so seriously, we don't have a lot of control as to how it unfolds.

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