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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-10-04 09:59 PM


Love Touches

Like the wind
it kisses your lips
and caresses your body
and then its gone.

Like the rain
it drenches you
til you are soaking wet
then comes a dry spell.

Like the sun
that gives its warmth
but too much
turns into a burn.

You can't possess it
dare you even try
love touches you
as elusive as a butterfly.

JamesLee
05October
2012

  
  


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ebonygirl
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1 posted 2012-10-04 10:31 PM


Enjoyed, James.
Ms. E

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2012-10-05 02:26 PM


YOu out did yourself James Michael.  
Love is all that!!!

Really wonderful poem!!!  

suthern
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3 posted 2012-10-11 04:03 PM


This is just beautiful... and so very true!!
JL
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4 posted 2012-10-11 05:41 PM


Nice write, James!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2012-10-11 10:06 PM


well said ...

I'm particularly fond of the ending!

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