whispers between the walls

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Open Poetry #48

whispers between the walls

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-09-29 06:59 PM

He use to lean on her when the wind
came through the creaked, open door
With her small hands, like carves of wood
onto his leather jacket

Between the walls
the shadows creased underneath
the chandelier above their calming heads

She use to walk the desert line
where the fall of eagles
came through the ruins
and placed their sides
on her skin

For the walls heard their voices
between his soft spoken voice
where the cross streets to their neighboring door
had trouble making out the words that
came from his lips onto her throat

For the walls had two sides
one for the wind to decide
and another for their lips to collide

Whispers between the walls
for the tired rise of her hair
seemed to whisper to the walls
for the quiet presence of light
to hold its breathe for the nights open air.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-09-30 02:03 AM

Oh... how the night air
opens onto those whispers that
raise the tips of her hair to
embrace the voice between the walls,
calling to her soft, sweet, suede leather
jacket. She stands again.

Enjoying your poetry,Tomer.
Ms. E

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2012-09-30 06:49 PM

I feel the longing to the point of being tangible.

Gorgeous poetry, Tomer.
I enjoy your writing so much!!!

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2012-10-01 04:35 PM

Ms. E-

Beautiful comments; always appreciated. Happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2012-10-01 04:36 PM

Blues-

Your words bring clarity to me. Happy you enjoyed it. Take care

Cheers

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