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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2012-02-05 07:00 PM


     The Mystery of a Rose

I was once a shadow
stumbling in a dream
down the rolling years;
but now, my love
has grown wings          
to sail beyond the moon
along the comet's trail
over star-bright skyways
  of eternity
where memories of you
shall remain forever fresh
and lovely, and deliciously fine
as the infinite mystery of a rose.

                    --- b. e. adams (2/5/2012)


© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-02-05 07:09 PM


It is to the memories such as this that leaves a wonderful taste in your mouth and your eyes glazed toward the heaves. Very good, Bruce.

At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2012-02-05 07:47 PM


Beautiful & so sad.
OwlSA
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3 posted 2012-02-06 01:55 AM


Bruce, pain has given you wings to fly with your beautiful memories of her, and to paint poetry even more exquisite than before.  I am sorry about your pain, but glad you have the comfort of the memories.

Owl

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