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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-09-14 08:15 PM

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I feel a weightlessness
merging within the liquid
sound of your voice
it sends me to a special place
only you can take me to
the clearness
of you, a courier
for love evermore
the pure joy of you
dancing upon my soul

©September 14, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-15-2012 06:14 PM).]

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2012-09-15 04:25 AM

Lovely, Jerry!

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2012-09-15 05:13 AM

Wow and double wow! To every phrase I relate. Liquid voice, clarity, the joy .... (to the library with your well expressed poem!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-09-15 06:19 AM

Thank you, Helen, for being here.

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JerryPat2
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Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-09-15 06:20 AM

I appreciate your kind comments, miscellanea, thank you.

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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2012-09-15 06:47 AM

Wow, Jerry -- you really nailed it with this one! I know precisely what you mean, and you captured the essence of a feeling felt but never really described in such terms... Very nice!

-MVS

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-09-15 07:05 AM

Thanks, Mark. It's nice to see you in my world.

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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

7 posted 2012-09-15 06:00 PM

JP, the voice is a distinct entity...
enjoyed!
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-09-15 06:13 PM

Thank you, Ms E., I so appreciate your comment.

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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

9 posted 2012-09-15 07:15 PM

You know I love the romance in this...wonderful...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-09-15 07:21 PM

Hi Karen, thanks for the feedback, and I know romance is big on your agenda.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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11 posted 2012-09-16 11:46 AM

I love, love this Jerry. It is sooo romantic! It does have a certain glow about it!

Lori

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

12 posted 2012-09-16 11:51 AM

Hi Lori, glad you like the poem, and thanks.

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suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2012-09-17 03:42 PM

it sends me to a special place
only you can take me to

Not long ago, I made an unintentional call when I pressed the wrong button. But I couldn't be sorry... for the voice that answered is the one that does this for me... I don't think angels could sound sweeter... or a mistake be better rewarded. LOL

Beautiful write... this is going into my library!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

14 posted 2012-09-17 03:47 PM

Darn, suthern, you almost brought tears to my eyes when you wrote, "I don't think angels could sound sweeter." Yesssssss! Thank you for making my day and thank you for your continued support of my poetry.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

15 posted 2012-09-17 03:55 PM

"a courier
for love evermore
the pure joy of you
dancing upon my soul"

Sweet sounds of love, picture perfect,
my friend.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

16 posted 2012-09-17 04:36 PM

Sweet sounds of love for sure, JL. Thank you for being here for part of it.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2012-09-17 10:40 PM

Nice and romantic...James

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