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Open Poetry #48

..obvious

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2012-09-09 05:10 AM

it was obvious
this was her big, black death book
she cracked it open
and asked me to spell my name
it wasn't too long a list
~~
..(C)2011/2012 Spiros Zafiris
..first in LYNX XXVI, Feb. 2011
~~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-09-09 05:45 AM

Heh heh I get those feeling too from time to time.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2012-09-09 07:31 AM

The touch of melancholy can't be ignored here, dear Spiros, it is powerful.

Instead of "black" I think of that list as "white" ... associating it with freedom.

Love and peace.
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2012-09-09 10:28 AM

thoùghtfùl and very poetic ùniverse, enjoyed a lot,

yann

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2012-09-09 12:33 PM

Enjoyed your poem, Spiros.
Ms. E

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2012-09-09 05:48 PM

..thank you friends and poets..much appreciate your having read..Jerry,
if i told you some of the story behind this poem even you--the man of great experience--
would slightly freak..but i can't discuss it now.i should write a short story..thanks,
all, again..>>>spiros
~~1976, will be the first sentence

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