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Open Poetry #48

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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2012-09-08 09:39 AM

Je trempe ma plume
Dans un grand verre de vin,
Je suis ivre d’un baiser
Posé par les voyelles qui dansent…

Demain, il fera beau….
Le soleil sera une orange,
Et nous serons deux mots
Echappés d’un dictionnaire….

I dip my nib
In a big glass of wine,
I am drunk with a kiss
Put by the vowels which dance …

Tomorrow, the weather will be beautiful.
The sun will be an orange,
And we shall be two words
Escapees of a dictionary.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-09-08 10:21 AM

Now that's poetry, dear Yann, how absolutely exquisite!

It is inspiring and brought a smile that lingers ...

Margherita

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

2 posted 2012-09-08 11:57 AM

fine writing, Yann. Romantic!

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2012-09-08 03:33 PM

that's awesome!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2012-09-08 03:51 PM

What a charming poem, yann. So glad to see you back.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2012-09-08 05:03 PM

Yann, j’aime tellement ce poème délicieux, séduisant, beau comme le lever du soleil, trempé de l’énigme; c’est de la poésie qui danse, qui chante, qui peint - un vrai chef-d’œuvre. Il me fait réfléchir si tu vois les voyelles comme une femme – ou une femme comme les voyelles – ou peut-être tous les deux. Je vais contempler longtemps ce qui peuvent être ces deux mots.

Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (09-09-2012 12:46 AM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2012-09-10 01:15 AM

A pleasure to read...James

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