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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-02-04 07:04 AM

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Love
it's mystic transcends Merlin's Magic
it's power is absolute
it's a happy, wonderful, sweet feeling
it's reverberations inside your heart sound louder than thunder
it's purity can, and should, make the world better

Love's Doppelganger
it's many things, none of which are good
it's fragileness could, and has, filled many tomes
it's dark side can frighten the witches of Macbeth
it's caused murder, mayhem, much blood
it's been instrumental in triggering full-fledged wars

Love puts a warm glow inside your chest,
Love's Doppelganger puts a hollow, hurtful place within your heart

©January 31, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-04-2012 12:26 PM).]

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2012-02-04 07:44 AM

so true and powerful , nothing has perfection and love is such something, thanks for the beautiful share

yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-02-04 08:22 AM

Thank you, Yann, for the sharing of your comments.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-02-04 10:27 AM

wise words my friend. well said.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-02-04 10:28 AM

Thank you, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2012-02-04 07:37 PM

wow! powerful & true, loved this interesting read

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-02-04 07:53 PM

Hello, tracie66, from under there . . . er . . I mean down under . . . Thank you for your nice compliment on my poem . . .

At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2012-02-04 11:38 PM

"Love
it's mystic transcends Merlin's Magic"

Very nice write, my friend.
And this poem has mystic powers too...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-02-05 05:39 AM

Thanks, JL, I am glad you liked the poem and appreciate that you found the time to comment.

At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

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