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Ericc
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0 posted 2012-08-28 03:50 PM



It's the world...and
beyond -
existing in flesh and thought and still
more - an unseen heart beating as
the soul of our connection.
You...are the world of my
existence.
~

The thought that we are separate - that we are apart through time and distance is the worlds great lie. There is no place where we leave off and the world begins. There is no space that falls between us that does not contain the thought of you - there is no world - only you in every possible dimension.


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-08-28 04:45 PM


Your incredibly beautiful words release an intense flow of energy that permeates me and brings new awareness and peace.

The Oneness with All there is ... nobody expresses it better than you, dear Eric.

Awesome.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-08-28 05:11 PM


quote:
There is no place where we leave off and the world begins.

As you write, it is the all-encompassing presence of love that shrinks distances and makes you, and her, fulfilled.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
3 posted 2012-08-28 10:16 PM


Nice...

j.

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2012-08-29 02:54 PM


Sweetly beautiful...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2012-09-04 07:10 PM


Aw yes yes yes!  Perfectly said and done Ericc.

Thank you for your wise and comforting words.


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2012-09-12 05:53 PM


True but I still like to have my sweetheart close...James
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