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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us a zephyr moves the night giving the trees their soft sway rustling leaves 'neath the moon's glow bright tonight like a highlight from heavens' portal causing the dark to recede spotlighting the grass bending in cadence with the leaves as they quiver from the gentle wind a different kind of light cascades silently an open window curtains pulled allowing artificial light to subdue the night noise from inside the room penetrates and whispers as a pleasant smell wafts from within as the zephyr begins to grow in intensity window slams shut curtain shuts down the night leaves on the trees shimmy and dance but this time only the stars are observing ©July 31, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice write, Jerry. Great picture as well. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good day, JL, thank you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Those stars see and hear all, don't they my friend, even when hiding behind clouds... j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes the do indeed see and hear all, J. Appreciate the comments and good to see you again. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
The picture is stunning and the words are filled with the magic of a vision...the stars do indeed see all...I really like this one...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! I can see where this one might "grab" you (Star)time . . . er . . . Karen. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so beautiful... and you chose the perfect picture! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, suthern, for your welcomed comments. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sometimes the intensity of a storm is such that, even shutting yourself in, it lays claim to part of your soul. That, my friend, is an eerie feeling and you have captured it well. Love the pic as well. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Absolutely correct, Michael. I'm beginning to believe that our souls are fragile things and are fair game for the nefarious ways of the world. Thanks for stopping by. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
read this the other day but didn't have time to comment...the more I read it the better I like it, especially the last line. Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love the images you portray. I really am fond of your writing Liz |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so much, Liz, I can say the same about your poetry also. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am glad I found this tonight, it fits the full moon atmosphere. Most beautiful really. Love the picture too of course. (Was just out and took a dozen pictures of the full moon, but it is difficult to capture the full magic ...). Very nice. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, it is very difficult to capture the magic of a full moon, Margherita, but we try don't we, we try and try again, hoping that maybe . . . I'm glad you found the poem tonight too, and thank you for stopping long enough to read and comment. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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