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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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Michigan

0 posted 2012-08-19 11:45 AM



He had her eyes
hazel with a mist of spring

Their conversation was grace
beyond the dessert rays
between the monologues and elongated stares

They were virtue
lust lost along a silent stare

With the privilege of summer
glazing off the sun
and blank canvass of a sky
that adorned the winds plight
and most of all,
the absent heart that lay quiet.

© Copyright 2012 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2012-08-19 04:20 PM


Exquisite, eloquent, mystical, enigmatic, mesmerising and beyond beautiful, as always, Tomer.  One of your very best, and that is saying tomesful.

Owl

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-08-19 04:50 PM


Your words took me on a magical flight...absolutely beautiful...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
3 posted 2012-08-20 08:09 AM


Within his eyes and her touch, there; a calm
reassuring moment of love.
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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4 posted 2012-08-20 07:07 PM


Owl,

Appreciate the commons, as always.  Happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
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Michigan
5 posted 2012-08-20 07:08 PM


Start -

Happy you could escape for a bit.  

Take care

Tomer

Tomer
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Michigan
6 posted 2012-08-20 07:09 PM


Ms. E

Appreciate your poetic spirit.

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2012-08-20 09:23 PM


Nice...James
Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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Michigan
8 posted 2012-08-20 10:01 PM


Thanks, James.  Hope you're doing well.

Cheers

Tomer

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