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OwlSA
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0 posted 2012-08-18 09:00 AM



FINGERTIP-SPEAK
3 August 2012

I touched your almost whisper
in the wind, today.
It wrapped itself
around me
for
a flutter-moment
and then
it drifted away
as far out of reach
as your wild honey lips
are forever
removed
from mine.

Owl

© Copyright 2012 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2012-08-18 10:09 AM


Nice snippet of Romanticism !
OwlSA
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2 posted 2012-08-18 10:20 AM


Thanks, Bruce.  Glad you like it.

Owl

luminosity
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3 posted 2012-08-18 10:57 AM


wow you write so romantical, it is so good to see that it has not died, for it has been many years since romance has wisped through my mind as it does yours
OwlSA
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4 posted 2012-08-18 11:41 AM


Thank you, luminosity, for your kind words.

Owl

Startime1955
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5 posted 2012-08-18 02:52 PM


The tenderness of romance flows sweetly...very well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

OwlSA
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6 posted 2012-08-18 03:06 PM


Thank you for your lovely reply, Startime.

Owl

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2012-08-27 11:54 PM


Very nice...sometimes love slips away by the fingertips...James
miscellanea
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8 posted 2012-08-28 10:52 AM


So very lovely!  I will treasure your poem.   It speaks  to me.   Thank you for the gentle words.

Miscellanea

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2012-09-08 07:13 PM


You do romance so well, Diana.
                         Ida

OwlSA
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10 posted 2012-09-09 12:44 PM


Sorry James and Miscellanea.  I thought I had replied to you.  Thank you, both, for reading and enjoying so much.

Thank you, Ida, for your very kind words.  

Owl

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