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AllAnIllusion
New Member

since 2012-08-17

Posts 6

0 posted 2012-08-17 02:01 AM

Baby,
Baby blue eyes,
Everything's alright,
Go ahead and rest your eyes.

I'll always be here,
Our lives aren't the best,
Mommy isn't always there,
You can be a pest.

I'll be there for you,
Through thick and thin,
Just us two,
What counts is what's within.

You'll realize what this means someday,
When you're tore,
They hear what you say,
But not what it's for.

Baby,
Baby blue eyes,
Everything's alright,
Go ahead an rest your eyes.

(This poem would take a lot of explaining and I know it isn't good. I just felt like posting something.)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-08-17 02:53 AM

Welcome to Pip, dear Syd.

Whether you explain or not this is such a love filled, tender poem and the fact that you wrote it for your sister makes it even more precious.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-08-17 07:10 AM

Eh, it's fun trying to read between the lines . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

3 posted 2012-08-17 09:46 AM

Welcome to Pip!

This is a very touching poem. That's what sisters are for.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2012-08-17 09:48 AM

Syd...

Feel free to post anytime.

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-08-17 04:06 PM

Welcome to PIP, AllAnIllusion.
I enjoyed your first post and I look forward to reading
more. Ms. E

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2012-08-17 04:10 PM

I enjoyed your poem very much, there is so much love and heartfelt emotion poured into your words.

Welcome to the blue sea~

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

7 posted 2012-08-17 04:12 PM

welcome...and never feel the need to 'explain' poetry, it is what it is, and is always different to every reader...thanks for sharing

AllAnIllusion
New Member

since 2012-08-17

Posts 6

8 posted 2012-08-17 08:14 PM

Thank you all so much^_^ The fact that you read and took the time to share your thoughts on my poem makes me so happy(:

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

9 posted 2012-08-17 09:19 PM

It is heartfelt and that makes this poem beautiful...welcome...I look forward to more of your writing...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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