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Fragile
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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my fragile lies under layers of thin skin Unapparent it hides behind normal incognito It's phobic undertow pulling deep Beneath the placid worries wail LGR(C)8/14/12 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heavy phrases and words. Deep is the tone. I like you like this. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Oh my gosh I feel this poem deeply...I know the fragile of it...well done...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jerry, I don't much care for this aspect of myself but it does make for some writing material. Lori  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Startime I'm glad you could relate on one hand and sorry on the other. Hugs back at you Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I feel rotten. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-14-2012 08:26 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Why? your good stuff isn't all rainbows and butterflies and I like you like that  Lori |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Well done, Lori. Ms. E |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well said, Lori! Such much "hides behind normal incognito" in us all. Helen |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Unapparent it hides" We all seem to have innermost remorse for some aspect of our lives, thoughts, action, inaction... But we have friends and family to hug, and share with, and forget and forgive even the most egregious. So, hug and squeeze those sad regrets away, for tomorrow is a new day! HUGS!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
You write such touching poems. Once again, I fully ynderstand this one. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ebonygirl, Honeybunch, JL and Oklahoma Rose, Bless your hearts! I write about my "I feel like a freak" stuff and find I'm not the only one. thanks more than you know! Lori! |
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