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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2012-02-02 11:57 PM


the red lacquer dripping from this brush onto this canvas fills this heart with a shot of hope.
this two ounce glass I call my soul is overflowing because two ounces isn't enough.
I need more, I want more, and when the cavity living within me has reached it's prime, I'll stop searching.
I'll stop searching because I've found the diamond in the rough.

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I've come to realize that I write too figurative [sometimes]. and yet, I don't know how to write literal, because I my brain doesn't process things in a literal way. I live a figurative life, and I show it through writing.

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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tracie66
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1 posted 2012-02-03 05:59 AM


I love your figurative flash :bravo:

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-02-03 06:26 AM


Your writing if real enough for me, Star. Enough so that I felt each line as if I'd written it myself.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2012-02-03 06:33 AM


pleasing views of life...enjoyed it ms
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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4 posted 2012-02-03 09:14 AM


thank you, everyone

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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