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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-07-26 07:01 AM



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we all dream
some dream at night
within the deep canyons of their minds
to awaken knowing the dread
was caused by their own narcissism

some people dream in the daytime
these are the dreams that count
those who dream in the daytime
dream with eyes wide open
and work to make them come true

©June 29, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



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© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-07-26 10:23 AM


Amen to that!


Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-07-26 11:09 AM


Good Morning, Lori, and thank you.

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Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-07-26 12:40 PM


I am a dreamer for sure...love this poem, my friend...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-07-26 01:10 PM


Thank you, Karen, always good to see you.

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secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2012-07-26 10:44 PM


fine thoughts ... dream on !!
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2012-07-26 11:48 PM


Nice...James
ebonygirl
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7 posted 2012-07-27 02:32 AM


May we never stop dreaming, JP.
Enjoyed, ms. e

JL
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8 posted 2012-07-27 07:09 AM


So true...
Nice one, Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Scooter
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9 posted 2012-07-27 07:12 AM


Nice poem.


JerryPat2
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10 posted 2012-07-27 07:13 AM


Thanks, Bruce, nice comments.

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JerryPat2
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11 posted 2012-07-27 07:14 AM


Appreciate your thoughts, James.

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JerryPat2
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12 posted 2012-07-27 07:15 AM


That is true, Ms. E, when we stop dreaming we are as good as dead.

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JerryPat2
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13 posted 2012-07-27 07:16 AM


Hey! J.L. Good to see you again, and thank you.

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