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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-07-23 08:56 AM

she was smooth sigh mary she said
the easier one of her three sisters
didn't take no coddle to reasons why
just did what her woman skin said

and on occasional times she loved
but mostly just did the using thing
and enjoyed being played instrumental
without words to cloud her agreeable

she said the beer sign gave her urges
how it had the dew shimmer glowing down
like it needed someone to rub it slow
and did I like the windows open best

said everyone knew her voice in heaven
and they would just give her hell later
when she went buying greasy biscuits
and some good morning beans to grind

for the new notch on her list of strangers

______________

daark

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2012-07-23 12:04 PM

and on occasional times she loved
but mostly just did the using thing
and enjoyed being played instrumental
without words to cloud her agreeable

I think we've all known women... and men... such as this. But I can't think of a collector portrayed in better terms or a more descriptive way. *S*

Enjoyed this very much!!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2012-07-23 01:25 PM

Ms Suthern, thank you lady friend

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-07-23 02:50 PM

An interesting vison comes to life in this poem...your writing reminded that there are always some strangers in our lives...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2012-07-23 05:22 PM

Ms Star..thanks lady

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2012-08-07 01:25 AM

I have missed your poetry. Didn't know how much until I came back to read. Good writing and good reading.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2012-08-07 09:20 AM

ms ali-san...thank you little one....am glad you are back looking.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2012-08-07 08:36 PM

Smooth move yourself,

and the sigh, well it's all good!

"didn't take no coddle to reasons why"

Thatsa nice line D~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2012-08-08 07:37 AM

Thanks Babyblue

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