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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-02-01 03:24 PM

Thinking the unthinkable
In just another day in paradise
Where the sun always shines
except when it’s raining
and hope springs eternal
except in the dark of night
and life is but a dream
except for when it hurts
and all the words won’t
fit back together again
as time takes its toll
on this crazy beach
with washed up issues

LGR©2/1/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-02-01 03:28 PM

Haha! Love the title. You covered it all within these lines. Good writing.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2012-02-01 03:31 PM

Thank you my friend for listening to me beach.

Lori

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2012-02-01 07:26 PM

Yup, times taking its toll is about the only thing you can count on in a world full of cliche, where exception, more often than not, becomes rule. I certainly can relate.

Michael

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2012-02-01 11:10 PM

I guess. Life is to short.
Take a trip to the mountains.

Enjoyed your write, Lori!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2012-02-02 09:49 AM

Michael and JL- Thank you so much for responding to this beach and moan poem. I really appreciate your support

Lori

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2012-02-08 09:48 PM

Fine writing...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2012-02-09 03:18 AM

Yes, you got that right, dear Lori. Very well expressed. The challenges will never stop to knock at our doors.

Margherita

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

8 posted 2012-02-09 05:29 AM

Lori: ah the ebb and flow (or shall I say flotsom and jetsom?) ends in washed up refuse..but lessons are learned and wisdom is gathered along the way (or shall I say shoreline?)

Enjoyed,

Al

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2012-02-09 10:36 AM

We need a day to discover
the beach in all of us.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

10 posted 2012-02-09 10:48 AM

Lol, yes Lori, sometimes it is.
Nice sense of humor , enjoyed your poem!
Ms. E

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

11 posted 2012-02-09 08:11 PM

Wow Guys and Gals I'm so surprised you have taken to this crazy beach...Thanks for the read and wonderful comments. I love you!

Hugs Lori

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