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Taking on an Illusion
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Taking on an Illusion |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us it is uncomplicated just grab onto the illusion which floats further than there the one that glows so you can easily identify it guiding your fingers the glow feels like skin that is the illusion weaving and bobbing peeping and a-hiding good golly Miss Molly it will cause you to smile widely altruistically as it were of alteration twisting you into elevated motivation you sense a jungle rhythm an enchantingness as you howl at the moon and laugh and laugh and . . . it is uncomplicated just grab onto the illusion which floats further than there ©July 4, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-17-2012 05:41 AM).] |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed this poem, JP. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank, Ms E., I appreciate it. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
like this very much Thank You |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much Connie. ~*~ Me nolentem fata trahunt. / Latin for . . . I will not be dragged by fate ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Vivid visions in this poem, my friend...well said...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I thank you, Karen and am hoping you are having a good day. ~*~ they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
As always, Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Great write. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so much, Trina, for the nice compliment. ~*~ they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate you comment, Marilyn, thanks. ~*~ they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Deep thoughts here. Good job Jerry Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. ~*~ they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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