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Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2012-07-13 12:29 PM

There you hold HER in your arms,
There you grace HER with your charms.
Here I watch with shocked dismay,
As my heart just melts away.

There you show your sultry smile,
There you touch HER for a while.
Here my skin begins to crawl,
As I suffer through it all.

There you whisper in HER ear,
I will love you always dear.
Here a tear runs down my cheek,
Here the pain bursts in a streak.

There you tell her I am bad,
There she helps you not be sad.
Here I break and fall apart,
Here I am......

Scooter
Member

since 2012-07-10

Posts 68

1 posted 2012-07-13 12:41 PM

I see. Yes. I do believe you can relate, Marilyn.

"The way to crush the bourgeoisie is to grind them between the millstones of taxation and inflation."-Vladimir Lenin

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-07-13 02:10 PM

My heart breaks for you...I know well the feeling of betrayal...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2012-07-13 04:39 PM

Wow...it's been awhile since I've been
through such an experience...you brought
it painfully home again.

Well done!

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2012-07-13 06:33 PM

Thank you for reading.

Sun..unfortunate this happened to me yesterday...man I know how to pick them.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-07-13 08:03 PM

Very sad stuff.
The traumatic hurt of love. It cuts deep.
Well expressed!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2012-07-14 01:03 AM

fine writing...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2012-07-14 10:28 AM

one can feel your words

M

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2012-07-16 04:07 PM

I now understand your comment to my Final Goodbye. Perhaps consider yourself lucky to have "escaped" and above all please, please, don't let yourself become a victim. We all too easily fall into that role and it's a killer. Glad you wrote it out though.

Helen

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2012-07-16 04:37 PM

You've put it well, my friend, for both sides of the fence...

j.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

10 posted 2012-07-17 07:49 PM

I can surely relate to the hurt in this poem! Although its very sad, its also a very beautiful poem! Amazing!

Kate

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

11 posted 2012-07-18 11:05 PM

Thank you all for reading me, I appreciate it.

Honey..... This was the last thing that I ever expected from this man. I will heal eventually and I will move on but I am not at all sure if I will ever allow myself to love this completely again.

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