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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-07-10 06:56 AM



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the older I get
the fewer truths I know
one truth I know well, however
is the face of fear
sometimes we come across people
with a face that has understood fear
eyes hooded with all the dread in the world
his words singing a song of incredulity
his spirit sagging
beneath the burden of deepest despair
I have seen that face
staring back through a mirror at me

people . . .
when we meet those
who have climbed the mountain of fear
sometime we just have to do things
for them
even if we're not sure
it's the right thing to do
but we do it
for the sake of humanity
we must reach out a helping hand
or an ear to listen
sometimes we must step
into the darkness
the step may lead nowhere
but there are times when
we must, absolutely must, take it

©July 9, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-07-10 09:25 AM


Oh yes my dear friend, you are giving a hand to one sinking in quicksand, you are a life line. Fear can be deadly.


Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-07-10 10:05 AM


Yes it can, Lori. Thank you.

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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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3 posted 2012-07-10 10:50 PM


WOW!!!I know that there is that face inside of me and slowly I am facing the fear but now I know that I must look in the mirror...Thank you so much...this poem has helped me in a way I cannot explain...I am greatful for your years of wisdom...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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4 posted 2012-07-10 10:56 PM


JP, I can tell you have faced your fears and are now ready to show others the way out... you are
very special my friend.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2012-07-11 06:02 AM


Yes, Karen, in my case it took looking into the mirror to find the person I had really become to begin making him go away. Thank you for your observation.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-07-11 06:05 AM


Fear is not a pleasant thing to have to live with, besides being something that can harm you mentally, it can outright cause death, Ms. E. Thank you for your comments.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-11-2012 08:24 AM).]

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2012-07-12 05:21 AM


I know what fear looks like, Jerry and you are right, It is not a pretty sight.
                                Ida

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-07-12 07:13 AM


Good morning, Ida. Fear is a loathsome and evil sight. Thank you for weighing in on this subject.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
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9 posted 2012-07-12 04:34 PM


Yes, it's true taking the step might be hard because of the fear of taking the step but it must be done.
Excellent write.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2012-07-12 04:42 PM


Hi, Eric, we're on the same page with this one.

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