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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-06-21 11:50 AM


she had a jesus tattoo on her breast
and a devil down lower above her heaven

said she was confused sometimes between
wondering which one was her favorite

and which one would I prefer to worship
if it took most of the night to get there

I said it didn't matter too much really
eventually they would just blend somewhere

between heaven and hell and then again
since we were already ruining our purity

and giving sin a more proper accommodation


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1 posted 2012-06-21 12:58 PM


Very nice balance of naughty and not-so-naughty teasing.  Or something like that.  Very nice anyway.  I like it.

ali-san

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-06-21 01:15 PM


Thanks lil Ali-san...
Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-06-21 03:50 PM


I agree...very naughty but also well written...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-06-21 05:11 PM


Ms Star..thanks lady...just a little meta of good and evil and playground games.
Startime1955
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5 posted 2012-06-21 07:44 PM


Well...it brought me back for a second and third reading...so that says alot...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Sunshine
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6 posted 2012-06-21 11:59 PM




sorta says it all...
just not so poetically.

I prefer yours.


Nicole
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7 posted 2012-06-22 06:56 AM


junk yard... how apropos for me.  there doesn't have to be a favorite if both are treated equally.
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2012-06-22 07:45 AM


Ms Star...thank you for each time you do it...grin

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Sweetsun...more or less yes...thanks lady friend

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Ms Moppet...the best parts can be found in the JY...plus you can always make em fit.  thanks girl!!

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